Charles is my name Laundering my room is the game Easily and steadily, this year is the time frame Although is has been three dozen years, 2013 is the one of fame Now is the time that the organization will begin and this beast I will tame
I have not made any New Years resolutions, instead I am making daily resolutions. Each day there is one resolution I will make until it is done, organize my room.
This is a very interesting poem, I liked your style and your set up.
simple and funny is the way too go somethings, and your food at that and I hope you keep writing like this.
I use to write kinda like this when I was younger, just very easy to do, and easy isn't bad.
The impact of this, is a good laugh, and everyone needs one every now and again. Always keep up the good work, and I hope to keep reading your work, and keep laughing. You can only get better when you try,and I know you try.
simple and funny is the way too go somethings, and your food at that and I hope you keep writing like this.
I use to write kinda like this when I was younger, just very easy to do, and easy isn't bad.
The impact of this, is a good laugh, and everyone needs one every now and again. Always keep up the good work, and I hope to keep reading your work, and keep laughing. You can only get better when you try,and I know you try.
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