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A Love The Lasts ForeverThere is a girl, special in my heart
She is beautiful, very sexy and smart
Her name is like a song that is living art
Her eyes are mine and we are living at the start
FriendFinally I can see
Really see your heart
It is so big and beautiful
Even with all your defects
No one can replace you
Don't ever change
HeavenHere on the planet so small
Everyone who hates exists
And it breaks my heart
Very much, almost intolerable
Every breath I breathe is
Not without any hesitation of love
AoruArt and beauty forming an image
Our hearts touch and reality flux
Reality is bent, personality vent
Under the gentle surf, psyche augment
AngelA river of tears, an ocean of time
No one will miss you more than me
Given to the Earth, your body is
Evangelical choir calls forth the
Last of your breaths, you are my child.
LiesLiving in this hell
In this body of a shell
Even now my blood is burning
So hot, flesh asunder, soul churning
RuinedRare in form and mind, I see the
Universal truth of myself and the concept
Inside stirs my emotions and soul, I have something
New that is consuming my entire personality, this husk I wear
Exhausted by pressure, coal cracked inside, the diamond shines through
Deep rousings reveal the beauty of the feminine soul, the heart I cannot deny.
ReleaseRealms of conciousness
Exalted bliss to be found within
Lamentations of pain, let it all go
Eagles sight set on the future, sailing
All on the winds of change I see the truth
Sadness is the mask worn until the souls' beauty
Escapes from the past, a beatiful dream is realized
I'm Not PerfectI'm not perfect,
I never said I was.
So you shouldn't expect me to be.

I'll make mistakes,
And I'm not afraid to admit that.

I'll do the best I can to make you happy,
Just know that some days it isn't going to be easy.

I'll love you for you,
And nothing else.
I would never expect you to change for me,
Because I wouldn't change for you.

If you can't love me with all my imperfections,
Than you don't deserve me.

I'm not perfect,
So don't expect me to be.
And I would never expect you to be.
Two HeartsTween the beats of my heart I feel a stirring
Within this skin a new soul is forming, unblurring
On the path of rebirth I feel the love inside purring

Here on the clouds of raptured bliss I see the strength of my soul
Every breath I take is two, the dance of life starts to make me whole
A wave of emotional and spiritual bliss reveals the light reveals my role
Reaching into the world I see the love again, a rebirth of my mind is control
This is what life is, not the scars and blisters festering in the deep black hole
Sparks will ignite the passion, you are own jailer, set yourself free and reject parole
LightLazily the days and years drearily pass
I feel the weight of destiny cutting me like glass
Genealogy of my family demands that I be better than the working class
High from the sky I fall, sucking in the the air that is no better than poison gas
Through the fall I see the truth of myself and grow my own wings, I shall make my own forecast
Ode To My Broken HeartUpon the light I see myself.
I see the past and who I was.
I see the future and what I want.
I see the present and I see myself.
Away from this life is another.
There is a place where I am safe and loved.
That life is alien and cold, too distant.
My flesh cracks and breaks open, revealing inside.
There is emptiness and a void where my heart should be.
There is nothing yet there is me, a paradox of flesh and lies.

My eyes open, a light shining through them.
The truth shines through and revelations abound.
I look and feel and walk and live and feel cold.
These hands, this body, a vessel empty inside.
No heart, no soul, just bleak eternity to b
Words Unspoken"Hey, what's the matter?"

'Everything.
Everything is falling apart
And I know in my heart
Nothing is alright
I try and struggle and fight,
But nothing is as planned,
Like winds stealing sand,
It's all gone at the end of the day,
And I just need someone to tell me it's okay'

"Nothing."
just another girland I can't understand
  the loneliness I feel
Stuck in a sea of faces
  knowing none of them are real
screaming, fighting, shouting
calling out in vain
no one ever listens
they only know my name
assimilate, I beg myself
be just another girl
society is too far linked
to not find a mask in this world
LanguageI would give everything and heaven too,
I would give it all for one more moment with you.
Love is hard to translate, it makes no sense to me
It speaks in a language of it's own, you see.
The words come out, all wrong and damaged,
I've tried to put them together, patched and bandaged,
but with all my knowledge I do not know how.
I will succeed, I will put them back in poetry, I vow!
Please do not get lost, find your way through the mazes
of these words and stumbling phrases,
while I fight, no, while I win this war
against a language that I never knew existed before.
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Lets throw away all the labels and
Open our hearts to see the beauty
Veiled eyes now shining so bright
Everyone sees the beauty inside
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Only after the shackles of labels are dead and gone can love sweep this Earth and unify us in strength.
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Critique by ~Doritos1996 Nov 21, 2012, 8:17:39 AM
Hello! I'm here on behalf of :iconthe-writers-study:. You submitted this to the critique folder so I'm here to give you the critique.

To begin with, the thing that makes this poem really impressiove is how it manages to pass a message across and bring out a lot of emotions to the reader within a few lines.
I like the idea of LOVE. Each letter of every line creates the word, truly impressive, indeed. The adjective 'veiled' really fascinated because it passed the image of veiled, covered eyes to my mind,

Thare's only one thing I'd like to point out. You've used the word 'beauty' twice in just four lines, repeating yourself. It just doesn't sound right.

Other than that, you did a wonderful job.
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Mood: Love *Givemore Dec 12, 2012  Student Photographer
I truly fell in love with this poem. I really really enjoyed it and it spoke to me in a special way. Thank you for sharing this. I can't wait to read some of your other stuff.
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*TwinAgateDragons Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I really try to pour my heart and soul into my written works and I have a whole bunch of material that I think you might enjoy.
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